English cards - escapees

We talk here about escapees cards

*Am'n Ayassarr
Alchemical Explosion:
Change to "Am'n inflicts 2 DAM to all miniatures within 2 inches and 1 DAM to all miniatures between 2 to 4 inches from him."

*Khalid Skinner (BOTH CARDS)
Cut Tendon:
Change to "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it gains the same bonus as when using the skill “Sequential Attack”."
I don't understand this skill. The Skinner gains Sequential Attack when it is allowed a bonus die (such as when charging), but it already has Sequential Attack according to its list of skills on the front of the card.

Escapees description on all cards:
Delete "The" and add a c to effet: "Escapees ignore the effect of the ability “Diplomatic Immunity”."

Khalid Skinner (both cards)
Cut Tendons
Change to: "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

Am’n Ayassarr, Pyritin Ifrit
Both front and back of card, capitalize necrosis: "Alchemical Necrosis"

Alchemical Explosion - does this work only when the ifrit rolls a 4 for damage? or is an ability that it can activate at will?

Alchemical Explosion. I read it as only when rolling a 4.

Yeah, I kind of figured that out, but if so I think it needs clarification in the written rules - you know it's going to cause issues if not written out.

Maybe change the first sentence to:
"When an attack is made and <explosion sign> is rolled on the DAM Chart, the Ifrit inflicts 2 DAM to all…"

totally agree

Vegabond a écrit:*Am'n Ayassarr
Alchemical Explosion:
Change to "Am'n inflicts 2 DAM to all miniatures within 2 inches and 1 DAM to all miniatures between 2 to 4 inches from him."

Mallachain a écrit:Am’n Ayassarr, Pyritin Ifrit
Both front and back of card, capitalize necrosis: "Alchemical Necrosis"

OK

Mallachain a écrit:Escapees description on all cards:
Delete "The" and add a c to effet: "Escapees ignore the effect of the ability “Diplomatic Immunity”."

OK

Vegabond a écrit:*Khalid Skinner (BOTH CARDS)
Cut Tendon:
Change to "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it gains the same bonus as when using the skill “Sequential Attack”."
I don't understand this skill. The Skinner gains Sequential Attack when it is allowed a bonus die (such as when charging), but it already has Sequential Attack according to its list of skills on the front of the card.

Mallachain a écrit:Khalid Skinner (both cards)
Cut Tendons
Change to: "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

I prefer clear...
If the skinner obtains 2 bonus die, it also gains 2 bonus die for "sequential attack".
If the skinner has 1 malus die, it also gains 1 malus die for "sequential attack".

Mallachain a écrit:Change to: "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

Is that right ?

Mallachain a écrit:Maybe change the first sentence to:
"When an attack is made and <explosion sign> is rolled on the DAM Chart, the Ifrit inflicts 2 DAM to all…"

OK.

nicoleblond a écrit:

Mallachain a écrit:Khalid Skinner (both cards)
Cut Tendons
Change to: "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

I prefer clear...
If the skinner obtains 2 bonus die, it also gains 2 bonus die for "sequential attack".
If the skinner has 1 malus die, it also gains 1 malus die for "sequential attack".

Mallachain a écrit:Change to: "During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

Is that right ?

In that case, let's change it to:
"During combat, if the Skinner gains a bonus/penalty die for its COM Roll, it also gains a bonus/penalty die when using the “Sequential Attack” skill."

OK, done

Cumbersome is wrong.

Cumbersome :
Hakan cannot spend 2 AP at once during his activation to use his scorpion.

In architekt it currently reads:

Cumbersome
During his activation, Hakan must spend 2 AP to fire his scorpion.

What are you saying is wrong with this?

Hakan spend 1 AP to fire his scorpion, but he can't fire again just after.

Exemple :
- shoot, walk, shoot, charge : ok he can
- shoot, shoot, walk, charge : no, he can't

Kurlem a écrit:Hakan spend 1 AP to fire his scorpion, but he can't fire again just after.

Exemple :
- shoot, walk, shoot, charge : ok he can
- shoot, shoot, walk, charge : no, he can't

I understand. It should be changed to the following then.

Cumbersome
During his activation, Hakan cannot spend 2 AP in a row to fire his scorpion.

Vegabond a écrit:

Cumbersome
During his activation, Hakan cannot spend 2 AP in a row to fire his scorpion.

OK

Card of convicts of the tooth (it miss concept for now)
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/bagnard2-uk.pdf

Choker 2
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/etrangleur2-uk.pdf

Plunderer
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/pillard-uk.pdf

There are already cards for the Convicts and Chocker you know, right?

I would change the text of Escapees on all 3 cards to "ignore the effect of the skill".

Convicts

Flavor Text
...sister. The ambassador had hired the best bodyguard and followed his safety procedures precisely. They wore cheap clothing, low quality weapons and no fragrance.
Unfortunately, they only wanted their lives...
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Choker & Plunderer look fine.

Plunderer

Run and you’ll dodge the chains that want to bind you.
Run as fast as you can. But do you escape faster than our claws?

mallachain a écrit:Plunderer

Run and you’ll dodge the chains that want to bind you.
Run as fast as you can. But do you escape faster than our claws?

Heh, how did I overlook that? In that last sentence I'd say "But do you move faster..."

OK, I've made corrections. Thanks

Convict
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/bagnard2-uk.pdf

Choker 2
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/etrangleur2-uk.pdf

Plunderer
http://www.alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/pillard-uk.pdf