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Message  nicoleblond le Jeu 26 Fév 2015 - 23:15

Here to talk about aurlok nation english cards.
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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  Captain Caverne le Ven 27 Fév 2015 - 8:57

Relecture OK pour moi.

Remarques :
- pour les guerriers crapaud, tu n'as pas mis le petit texte d'ambiance de la VF en dessous du descriptif d'hémotoxique. Je suppose que c'est volontaire ? Very Happy
- Pour les compétences, je n'ai fait que vérifier les intitulés (présence sur le recto/verso), je n'ai pas relu le contenu explicatif de chaque compétence.
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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  Kurlem le Ven 27 Fév 2015 - 16:39

relecture OK aussi, sur les mêmes points que pour Avalon.
Kurlem a écrit:Pour ce qui concerne les PV, ESP, REF, PA, COM, DEF, mouvement, nombre de compétence, table de DOM, coût, nombre de carte max, cercle de concentration, concentration pour les formules, coût des formules, portées, cible ou auto, et les améliorations;
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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  mallachain le Mar 3 Mar 2015 - 22:29

Crow Thunder-Warrior
Fronts of all cards: "Javelines" should be changed to "Javelins"

Change first card's text to: "The four silhouettes moved in complete silence, the screeching of the crows covering their advance. It was impossible to know if the Crow Thunder-Warriors used the diversion created by their totem or if they were somehow the cause of it. Whatever the case, they managed to close with their enemies without being noticed. By the time the foes realized they were under attack, it was too late."

Change last sentence of third card to: "« By the Beathacrann, they’ll be expecting us lads!»


Toad Hive Throwers
Change last 2 sentences of Bees to: "Immediately remove the hive token if the bees cause 3 or more DAM during an attack. The hive-Throwers are immune to the effects of the bees."

Manitou-Warrior
Change Possession of Waga to: "As soon as the Manitou-Warrior or an allied Aurlok miniature within 6 inches takes 1 DAM from an enemy miniature or effect, cross out one of the squares on the possession line of the Manitou-Warrior (he has 10). Damage taken by the Empathy ability doesn’t apply. Once all the squares have been crossed out, replace the miniature of the Auroch Manitou-Warrior with that of the Possessed Auroch Manitou-Warrior. The possessed figure keeps any game effect as well as DAM previously suffered by the Auroch Manitou-Warrior."

Wolitze Night-Breeze
Stealthy - change sight to aim: "...the shooter that targets it lose it’s aim bonus even if this reaction.."

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  Vegabond le Mer 4 Mar 2015 - 1:53

In addition to what Mallachain already said.

mallachain a écrit:Crow Thunder-Warrior
Fronts of all cards: "Javelines" should be changed to "Javelins"

Change first card's text to: "The four silhouettes moved in complete silence, the screeching of the crows covering their advance. It was impossible to know if the Crow Thunder-Warriors used the diversion created by their totem or if they were somehow the cause of it. Whatever the case, they managed to close with their enemies without being noticed. By the time the foes realized they were under attack, it was too late."

Should there only be 3 silhouettes? I mean since you can only take 3 in a war band? Smile

mallachain a écrit:Change last sentence of third card to: "« By the Beathacrann, they’ll be expecting us lads!»

Toad Hive Throwers
Change last 2 sentences of Bees to: "Immediately remove the hive token if the bees cause 3 or more DAM during an attack. The hive-Throwers are immune to the effects of the bees."

Manitou-Warrior
Change Possession of Waga to: "As soon as the Manitou-Warrior or an allied Aurlok miniature within 6 inches takes 1 DAM from an enemy miniature or effect, cross out one of the squares on the possession line of the Manitou-Warrior (he has 10). Damage taken by the Empathy ability doesn’t apply. Once all the squares have been crossed out, replace the miniature of the Auroch Manitou-Warrior with that of the Possessed Auroch Manitou-Warrior. The possessed figure keeps any game effect as well as DAM previously suffered by the Auroch Manitou-Warrior."

Wolitze Night-Breeze
Stealthy - change sight to aim: "...the shooter that targets it lose it’s aim bonus even if this reaction.."

Wolitze Night-Breeze. Stealthy: Last sentence, remove the additional "to". "The miniature is placed as close to to the Stealthy miniature as possible without being in contact."

Toad Medicine Shaman. Empathy: change hit point to life point "This ability cannot be used if the shaman has only one life point left."
Also I see his limit of (1) on the back by his name was removed. Can you take more than 1? If so how many?

Wolf Spirit Guard. Life triangles need to be closer together to match all other cards.
Also Guard: Can guard be used on a Size 3 or larger model? If not, it needs to be reworded. "When a friendly Size 2 or smaller miniature up to 2 inches away is the target of a shooting, formula,..." This wording will have to be used on all other models from other factions too.

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  nicoleblond le Sam 7 Mar 2015 - 22:39

I make all corrections.
For guard skill, you can use on size 3 Very Happy
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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  mallachain le Dim 8 Mar 2015 - 19:36

Just a few more minor changes:

Toad Medicine Shaman
Empathy
I notice that the description lists "life hit points"
It should be "life points" to be consistent with the rest of the card.

Auroch Rain Dancer with Horn
War horn
Last sentence add enemy: "and all Severely (yellow) wounded enemy miniatures within 6 inches roll red dice in combat."

Auroch Manitou-Warrior
Both sides of Card "Tough 1" should be "Tough/1"

Possessed Auroch Manitou-Warrior
Both sides of Card "Tough 1" should be "Tough/1"

Tanka Wanka
Both sides of card "Steel grip" should be "Steel Grip"

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  nicoleblond le Lun 9 Mar 2015 - 21:58

I make changes
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Woa Wa'yake

Message  Vegabond le Mer 27 Mai 2015 - 1:24

Whoa, she is a beauty! Laughing

Tough
Last sentence: "The effects of Tough coming from several formulas are not cumulative."
Does it need to say "Tough/+x"? Other cards don't.

Totemic Emblem
While Woa Wa'yake is in play, friendly Aurochs gain the following effects:
- Auroch Totem-Warriors, 8 Mind and one free reactivation per round.
- Auroch Rain-Dancers, apply the instruments effect no matter the user's life level.
- Auroch Manitou-Warrior, whenever Woa Wa'yake suffers one or more DAM, cross out an additional box on the Manitou-Warrior's possession line.

Does Totemic Emblem encompass the entire play area?

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  mallachain le Mer 27 Mai 2015 - 2:55

I agree with Vagabond's edits.

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  nicoleblond le Mer 27 Mai 2015 - 13:00

Thanks Very Happy

Vegabond a écrit:Does Totemic Emblem encompass the entire play area?
Yes. Auroch heroine is only playable with aurochs profiles. You will play only 5 models, so the level of play will be quite difficult.
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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  nicoleblond le Mar 1 Mar 2016 - 9:59

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Re: English Cards - Aurlok Nation

Message  Vegabond le Mar 1 Mar 2016 - 17:43

The card looks good. The miniature looks just like the artwork! Very good job.

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