New miniatures of november

Convocation of the Elders

The Wolf Night-Shaman may summon an Ancestor-Spirit or a Hero-Spirit within range.This spirit get in game, not in combat and can be activated normally during the round in which they are summoned . Only one spirit may be summoned at a time and each type of spirit may only be summoned once per game. The spirit disappears if the Wolf Night-Shaman dies or his concentration level becomes 0. A Spirit may never be recruited into a warband, it must be summoned.

anyone can read back the  new formula of the Wolf Night-Shaman, please ??

Je dirais:

el_ludo a écrit:Convocation of the Elders

The Wolf Night-Shaman may summon an Ancestor-Spirit or a Hero-Spirit within range.This spirit get in game, not in combat and can be activated normally during the round in which they are it is summoned . Only one spirit may be summoned at a time and each type of spirit may only be summoned once per game. The spirit disappears if the Wolf Night-Shaman dies or his concentration (je crois que c'est focus le terme utilisé) level becomes 0. A Spirit may never be recruited into a warband, it must be summoned.

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el_ludo a écrit:Convocation of the Elders

The Wolf Night-Shaman may summon an Ancestor-Spirit or a Hero-Spirit within range. When summoned, the spirit cannot be placed in combat, though it can be activated normally during the round in which it is summoned. Only one spirit may be summoned at a time and each type of spirit may only be summoned once per game. The spirit disappears if the Wolf Night-Shaman dies or his concentration level becomes 0. A Spirit may never be recruited into a warband, it must be summoned.

anyone can read back the  new formula of the Wolf Night-Shaman, please ??

Skill and formulas of Abdelan

Chaotic Inspiration
Once per round, when Abdelan makes an opposed roll against an enemy miniature, he can decide to swap one of the dice he rolled with one of the dice his opponent rolled. Not usable on initiative roll.


Serenity
Target model in range. Each targeted enemy model can make a Mind roll in opposition with Abdelan. If successful, it does not suffer the effects of formula. Otherwise, all ongoing effects of formulas in which it was previously the target are immediately canceled on target model. The damage and displacement already resolved are not canceled.

Enhancement:
1 stone for an additional target in range


Reflection of Reality
Abdelan chooses a formula in the list of an alchemist at least 8 inches and on which it has a line of sight. Cost of water component for Abdelan is the cost components of the formula chosen. The requested level of concentration, range and difficulty are those of the formula chosen. Abdelan may attempt to launch the chosen formula. He considers all indications people as Khaliman and can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula.

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nicoleblond a écrit:Skill and formulas of Abdelan

Chaotic Inspiration
Once per round, when Abdelan makes an opposed roll against an enemy miniature, he can decide to swap one of the dice he rolled with one of the dice his opponent rolled. Not usable with the initiative roll.


Serenity
Target an enemy model in range. Each target makes an opposed Mind roll with Abdelan. If successful, it does not suffer the effects of this formula. Otherwise, all ongoing effects of formulas in which it was previously the target are immediately canceled. Damage and displacement effects already resolved are not canceled.

Enhancement:
1 stone for an additional target in range.


Reflection of Reality
Abdelan chooses a formula in the list of an alchemist in line of sight and at least 8 inches away. Abdelan may attempt to cast the chosen formula. Abdelan uses water components to pay the component cost for the chosen formula. The requested level of concentration, range and difficulty are those of the formula chosen. He considers all indications people as Khaliman and can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula.

Sorry, I didn't see that each character had its own tread until after I'd posted them here.

Wolf-Night Shaman
3rd card
Howl of Ill Omen
Target the Wolf-Night Shaman. The range indicates an area of effect around him. The Shaman gains the Frightening (12) skill until the end of the round. All enemy models within range must succeed at a Mind test or suffer the effects of the Frightening skill for the rest of the round.

Enhancements:
1 to increase the range by 1 inch.
1 to increase the level of the Frightening skill by 1.

Airlock Ancestor Spirit <- delete the hyphen(-)
on the 1st and 2nd card

2nd card
Spirit
Spirits have the Fearless skill. A Spirit cannot be the target of alchemical effects, allied or enemy (including area effects and templates). A Spirit may disengage without making an opposed REF roll.

Airlock Hero Spirit
1st card
Fearsome should be Frightening (14)

2nd card
Spirit
Spirits have the Fearless skill. A Spirit cannot be the target of alchemical effects, allied or enemy (including area effects and templates). A Spirit may disengage without making an opposed REF roll.

Mordren
1st card
Double Transplant

2nd card
Double Transplant
Excess Sap: any model that Mordren has dealt 2 or more DAM to this round has a -2 COM penalty until the end of the round."
Rooted Graft: Mordren gains the Tough (1) skill until the end of the round.
Moving Graft: the next model that...
Budding: "until the end of the round."

Abdelan
2nd card
Chaotic Inspiration
"opposed roll against an enemy model, he can choose to swap"

3rd card
Serenity
Target a model in range. Abdelan makes an opposed Mind roll with each target. If successful, he immediately cancels all ongoing formula effects on the target (except already resolved DAM and displacement effects).

Enhancement:
1 for an additional target in range.

Reflection of Reality (x) <- Shouldn't this be x too?
x Water / x in. / x
Choose a formula that an alchemist at least 8 inches away and in line of sight can cast. Abdelan may attempt to cast the chosen formula. Abdelan uses water components to pay the chosen formula's component cost. The required level of concentration, range and difficulty are those of the formula chosen. He considers all references to people as Khaliman and can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula.

Enhancement:
As per the selected formula.

Alchemist Crystal Sun
3rd card
Blinding Whirlwind
Target the alchemist. The range indicates an area of effect around him. All allied models within range gain the Stealthy skill. Any model attempting a ranged attack against an on watch model with the Stealthy skill within the area of effect will gain a Penalty die to its test. The formula lasts until the end of the round.

Enhancements:
2 to increase the range by 1 inch.

Avenging Gale
Target the alchemist. The range indicates an area of effect around him. The alchemist can spend an alchemical stone to increase any COM or Ranged attack roll, or any DAM inflicted by a non-hero ally within the area of effect by 1. The alchemist can use the same effect as often as he wishes during a round, but he cannot spend more stones than his current concentration level. The formula ends when the concentration level of the alchemist reaches 0.

mallachain a écrit:Abdelan

Serenity
Target a model in range. Abdelan makes an opposed Mind roll with each target. If successful, he immediately cancels all ongoing formula effects on the target (except already resolved DAM and displacement effects).

This formula can be target on friendly and/or enemy model. If it's friendly model, there is not mind roll.

Purposition...
Serenity
Target a model in range. Each targeted enemy model can make an opposed Mind roll with Abdelan. If successful, it does not suffer the effects of formula. Otherwise, all ongoing formula effects are immediately canceled on target model (except already resolved DAM and displacement effects).

Enhancement:
1 stone for an additional target in range


Reflection of Reality (x) <- Shouldn't this be x too?
Yes

Serenity
Target a model (friendly or enemy) in range. Abdelan makes an opposed Mind roll with each targeted enemy model (automatic for allies). If successful, he immediately cancels all ongoing formula effects on the target (except already resolved DAM and displacement effects).

1 for an additional target and range.

"He considers all indications people as Khaliman": you must replace all indications of a faction (Avalonian, Aurlok, etc), in an enemy formula, by "Khaliman".

By the way, i have no example of formula in mind, which contains such indication. It's usually writed "friendly model".

Letchaï a écrit:"He considers all indications people as Khaliman": you must replace all indications of a faction (Avalonian, Aurlok, etc), in an enemy formula, by "Khaliman".

By the way, i have no example of formula in mind, which contains such indication. It's usually writed "friendly model".

How about this: Replace all faction indications (Avalonian, Aurlok, etc.) in enemy formulas with "Khaliman."

mallachain a écrit:

Letchaï a écrit:"He considers all indications people as Khaliman": you must replace all indications of a faction (Avalonian, Aurlok, etc), in an enemy formula, by "Khaliman".

By the way, i have no example of formula in mind, which contains such indication. It's usually writed "friendly model".

How about this: Replace all references to other factions in enemy formulas with "Khaliman."

Edited above. That will work.

OK, I've edit.

Reflection of Reality (x)
x Water / x in. / x
Choose a formula that an alchemist at least 8 inches away and in line of sight can cast. Abdelan may attempt to cast the chosen formula. Abdelan uses water components to pay the chosen formula’s component cost. The required level of concentration, range and difficulty are those of the formula chosen. Replace all references to other factions in enemy formulas with Khaliman, and you can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula.

Enhancement:
As per the selected formula


Right?

nicoleblond a écrit:OK, I've edit.

Reflection of Reality (x)
x Water / x in. / x
Choose a formula that an alchemist at least 8 inches away and in line of sight can cast. Abdelan may attempt to cast the chosen formula. Abdelan uses water components to pay the chosen formula’s component cost. The required level of concentration, range and difficulty are those of the formula chosen. Replace all references to other factions in enemy formulas with Khaliman, and you can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula.

Enhancement:
As per the selected formula


Right?

I'd change "Replace all references to other factions in enemy formulas with Khaliman, and you can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula."
to "Replace all references to other factions in enemy formulas with Khaliman. You can spend alchemical stones as indicated on the formula."