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Geography

Naashtis do not conceive the world in terms of territory and borders: they build fortresses around study points and trace roads going from one to the other citadel. Each of their citadels is led by two Eth~Kath (literally "city manager").
Since the Lunar Extinction, citadels are fully autonomous and not based on any outside resource. The tunnels are long underground conduits, quite wide, in which they pass through large artifacts. Their functioning is based on a thin Lightning-Water channel which transmits their energy and which is regularly recycled.

The Simh~Eth : refuges citadels

These are the citadels that were never abandoned, even in the heart of Lunar Extinction, Al~Eph and Ay~Hin. They are now regarded as the cradle of naashtie civilization and severely protected. Few members of other peoples are allowed to approach it.

Al~Eph (First Place) is in the depths of the Storm Archipelago in the middle of the Dreams' Ocean. It was built around the original fire pit, the Maw Fire, that Naash himself had studied so much. First naashtie citadel, it is also one of the most remote and most protected forever, which allowed him to survive the Lunar Extinction and serve as a refuge for the majority of survivors.
Bey~Saa'sn, the E'Dhu~Egir of the citadel, directs with great sagacity the study of fire pits and lightning-water. The results he obtained at the forefront of naashties knowledge, arouse admiration and some envy in the other citadels.

Ay~Hin (Distant Fire Pit) is the geographical opposite of the previous one, in the depths of a lost island off the Opal Coast which contains impressive ardent veins. Since exile, this citadel specializes in alchemical research, and it is what is causing the antidote of the Cold Death. Its inhabitants are those who most ardently wished the return of Naashtis in the public arena and the revenge on the Blighted Moon.
Gash~Dahl'z, its E'Dhu~Egir, has the Ub-Lak for that, a tiny artifact wich might eradicate Jade Triad if one day it's released.

The Dakh~Eth : recolonized citadels

These citadels were deserted during the Lunar Extinction, but now Naashtis has returned and have discounts based. Their functionality is more or less advanced, according to the progress that it has been made and problems encountered during their reactivation.

Chim~Eth (Plants Citadel) is located in the heart of the Morning Mountains, close to Kaisealta Kastel, although Avalonians totally ignore its presence. It was one of the first citadels recolonized, but its reconquest is perpetually compromised by the growth of the Beathacrann's roots.

Mem~Eth (Citadel of Refrigeration) was built near a troglodyte Khaliman town led by the Ermadhi's line. During the recolonization, the Naashtis realized that the Ermadhi had discovered it and begun to explore. The citadel was thus discreetly partitioned into two, in order to leave the Ermadhi explore the ruins, while the rest was secretly awarded based.

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Geography

Naashtis do not conceive of the world in terms of territory and borders: they build fortresses around study points and create roads going from one citadel to another. Each of their citadels is led by two Eth~Kath (literally "city manager").
Since the Lunar Extinction, citadels are fully autonomous and not based on outside resources. The tunnels are long underground conduits, quite wide, which pass through large artifacts. Their function is based on a thin Lightning-Water channel which transmits energy and is regularly recycled.

The Simh~Eth : refugees citadels
These are the citadels that were never abandoned, even in the heart of the Lunar Extinction, Al~Eph and Ay~Hin. They are now regarded as the cradle of naashti civilization and heavily protected. Few members of other peoples are allowed to approach them.

Al~Eph (First Place) is in the depths of the Storm Archipelago in the middle of the Dreams' Ocean. It was built around the original fire pit, the Maw Fire, that Naash himself studied. The first naashti citadel, it is also one of the most remote and most protected, which allowed it to survive the Lunar Extinction and serve as a refuge for the majority of survivors.
Bey~Saa'sn, the E'Dhu~Egir of the citadel, directs with great sagacity the study of fire pits and lightning-water. The results he obtains are at the forefront of the naashtis knowledge and arouses admiration and some envy in the other citadels.

Ay~Hin (Distant Fire Pit) is the geographical opposite of the previous one, in the depths of a lost island off the Opal Coast, which contains impressive ardent veins. Since exile, this citadel specializes in alchemical research and has created the antidote to the Cold Death. Its inhabitants are those who most ardently wish the return of the Naashtis to the public arena and revenge on the Blighted Moon.
Gash~Dahl'z, its E'Dhu~Egir, has the Ub-Lak, a tiny artifact which might eradicate the Jade Triad one day if it is released.

The Dakh~Eth : recolonized citadels
These citadels were deserted during the Lunar Extinction, but now Naashtis have returned and recolonized the bases. Their functionality is more or less advanced, according to the progress that has been made and problems encountered during their reactivation.

Chim~Eth (Plants Citadel) is located in the heart of the Morning Mountains, close to Kaisealta Kastel, although Avalonians completely ignore its presence. It was one of the first citadels recolonized, but its reconquest is perpetually compromised by the growth of the Beathacrann's roots.

Mem~Eth (Citadel of Refrigeration) was built near a troglodyte Khaliman town led by the Ermadhi's line. During the recolonization, the Naashtis realized that the Ermadhi had discovered it and begun to explore. The citadel was thus discreetly partitioned into two, in order to let the Ermadhi explore the ruins, while the rest of the base was secretly recolonized.

Geography

Naashtis do not view the world in terms of territory and borders: they build fortresses around study points and roads going from one citadel to another. Each of their citadels is led by two Eth~Kath (literally "city manager").
Since the Lunar Extinction the citadels have become fully autonomous and aren't reliant on any outside resources. The tunnels are long underground conduits, quite wide, in which they pass through large artifacts. Their power is based on a thin Lightning-Water channel which transmits their energy and is regularly recycled.

The Simh~Eth : refuges citadels

These are citadels that were never abandoned, even in the heart of Lunar Extinction, Al~Eph and Ay~Hin. They are now regarded as the cradle of Naashti civilization and extremely protected. Few members of other peoples are allowed to even approach them.

Al~Eph (First Place) is in the depths of the Storm Archipelago in the middle of the Dreams' Ocean. It was built around the original fire pit, the Maw Fire, that Naash himself had studied so much. Al~Eph was the first Naashti citadel and is one of the most remote and most protected. Because of this, Al~Eph was able to survive the Lunar Extinction and served as a refuge for the majority of survivors.
Bey~Saa'sn, the E'Dhu~Egir of the citadel directs with great sagacity the study of fire pits and lightning-water. The results he obtained at the forefront of Naashti's research cause great admiration and even some envy in the other citadels.

Ay~Hin (Distant Fire Pit) is the geographical opposite of the Al~Eph, in the depths of a lost island off the Opal Coast which contains impressive ardent veins. Since the exile this citadel specializes in alchemical research; it has found the antidote for the Cold Death. Ay~Hin's inhabitants are those who most ardently wish for the return of Naashti into the public arena and for revenge on the Blighted Moon.
Gash~Dahl'z, its E'Dhu~Egir, has the Ub-Lak for that, a tiny artifact which might eradicate the Jade Triad if it's one day released.

The Dakh~Eth : recolonized citadels

These citadels were deserted during the Lunar Extinction, but the Naashti have returned and have retaken the citadels. Their functionality is more or less advanced, according to the progress that has been made and problems encountered during their reactivation.

Chim~Eth (Plants Citadel) is located in the heart of the Morning Mountains, close to Kaisealta Kastel, although Avalonians totally ignore its presence. It was one of the first citadels recolonized, but its reconquest is perpetually compromised by the growth of the Beathacrann's roots.

Mem~Eth (Citadel of Refrigeration) was built near a troglodyte Khaliman town led by the Ermadhi's line. During the recolonization, the Naashti realized that the Ermadhi had discovered it and begun to explore. The citadel was thus discreetly partitioned into two in order to let the Ermadhi explore the ruins while the rest was secretly inhabited.

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