English cards - Empire of Jade Triad

We talk about english cards for Empire of Jade Triad

Relecture OK pour moi sauf pour Fu Nihao :
- Recto, il manque "Captain".
- Verso en VF, il n'y a pas la description de la compétence Allonge ... Est-ce qu'il ne serait pas pertinent de ne pas la mettre non plus en anglais ? Parce que là c'est écrit vraiment tout petit

Remarque :
- Pour les compétences, je n'ai fait que vérifier les intitulés (présence sur le recto/verso), je n'ai pas relu le contenu explicatif de chaque compétence.

Alchimist of the school of the long breath
Blast of Wind
Change to: "...The target is considered knocked down. Until..."

Chen Sze
Leap
Change 1st sentence to: "This skill can be used..."

Disciple of the School of the Crystal Sun
Capitalize "Wind" on both cards: "Lightness of the Wind"

Fu Nihao
Strategist
Change all instances of "Stealth" to "Stealthy"

Militia Archers
2nd card, change text to: "My men were in place, it only remained for me to near the target. In the crowded market of the city, militia lancers could never intervene in time to prevent the kidnapping! We would be away before they would arrive. Looking up the walls, I realized my mistake: there were three archers of the militia on the walkway of the market wall. They dominated the crowd and nothing escaped their sight! If we just raised a hand over our target, they’d pepper us with arrows without touching the onlookers around us. We would have to change our plans because of these archers."

Cobra Shadow Guard
Leap (both cards)
Change 1st sentence to: "This skill can be used..."

Whisper
Poisoned Weapon (both cards)
Change last sentence to: "A poisoned miniature suffers one penalty die to all of its rolls."

Xian Ling
Acrobat
Change last sentence to: "As long as Xian Ling uses white or yellow dice, he gets a bonus die for his REF Rolls."

Aerial diversion
Capitalize "Diversion"

I make all corrections

Captain a écrit:- Verso en VF, il n'y a pas la description de la compétence Allonge ... Est-ce qu'il ne serait pas pertinent de ne pas la mettre non plus en anglais ? Parce que là c'est écrit vraiment tout petit

Ca va encore, c'est du 6,75 points

Can you upload the new versions? I'll download then look through them.

*Chonkey front of card: The alchemical triangles should be turned upside down. For consistency.

*Captain Lee Ping back of card: Did he change from the Dong-Yi militia to Xi-Yi?

*Alchemist of the School of Long Breath; Alchemical Mastery: Are both the terms Focus Level and Concentration Level being used in the rules? Just checking.

*Militia Archers back of first card. Need a period at the end of the last sentence.

Whisper
Marksman 1
Add a "y" to "stealth": "A miniature with this skill ignores all cover effects (stealthy, scenery, miniatures, miniatures in combat)."

Vegabond a écrit:*Captain Lee Ping back of card: Did he change from the Dong-Yi militia to Xi-Yi?

No, it's Xi-Yi

Vegabond a écrit:*Alchemist of the School of Long Breath; Alchemical Mastery: Are both the terms Focus Level and Concentration Level being used in the rules? Just checking.

We've use concentration level in rulebook.

Vegabond a écrit:*Militia Archers back of first card. Need a period at the end of the last sentence.

Right. I think it's a mistake.
Your armor is not going to protect you for so long.
Do you think it's right?

nicoleblond a écrit:

Vegabond a écrit:*Militia Archers back of first card. Need a period at the end of the last sentence.

Right. I think it's a mistake.
Your armor is not going to protect you for so long.
Do you think it's right?

The sentence is fine, just needs a "." at the end.

The sentence is correct as written on the card.

Vagabond means that the period at the end of the sentence is missing.

A new miniature for subfaction: cobra guard

Disciple of the school of black wind

skill:
merger shadows (or shadow blend?)
If disciple is in contact with a scenery at the beginning or the end of a movement walk or a movement run, it can be placed in another location of the scenery. His final position must comply with the rules. It can then perform his movement walk or movement run normally.

Formula:
Shadow protection (or protection of shadows?)

Formula target alchemist. Range is an area effect around it. The formula lasts until the alchemist is injure.
Alchemist chooses one of the following effects:
- DEF of the alchemist and friendly miniatures in range is increased by 1.
- Alchemist and stealth friendly miniatures in range can not be charged or engaged by an opponent farther than 2 inches. Otherwise, the stealth rule remains unchanged.

Enhancement:
1 to 1 inch of extra reach.

Shadow slide
If the disciple is in contact with a scenery element at the beginning or the end of a walk or run movement, he can be placed at another location of the scenery element. His final position must comply with the rules. He can then perform his walk or run movement normally.

The way I interpreted it was that the disciple can move from one side of, say a hill, to the other. Is this what you had in mind?

Formula:
Shadow shield

This formula targets the alchemist. The range is the area around the alchemist. (How do you determine what the base range is?) This formula lasts until the alchemist is injured.
When cast, the alchemist chooses one of the following effects:
- DEF of the alchemist and friendly miniatures within range is increased by 1.
- Friendly miniatures within range with the Stealth skill, as well as the alchemist himself, cannot be charged or engaged by opponents farther than 2 inches away. Otherwise, the Stealth rule remains unchanged.

Enhancement:
1 to increase the range by 1 inch.

That's right. He pass through the scenery.

For the formula, it's range around him, like "prayer to the stones" of countryside priest (avalon).

Suggestions
Character Card Front
*Disciple of the school of Black Wind Capitalize
*Shadow Slide Capitalize

Character Card Back
*Shadow Slide Capitalize
*If the disciple is touching a scenery element at the beginning or the end of a walk or run movement, he can be placed at another location touching the same scenery element. His final position must comply with the rules. He can then perform his walk or run movement normally. Slight rewording

Formula Card Front
*Disciple of the school of Black Wind Capitalize
*Shadow Shield Capitalize
*2 Air / 2" / auto drop the "s" from Air
*- The alchemist and all friendly miniatures within range with the Stealthy skill, cannot be Charged or Engaged by opponents farther than 2" away. Otherwise, the Stealthy rule remains unchanged. Capitalization of game terms, add "y" to Stealth, reworded to save space
*1 to increase the range by 1".

I really like the wording of this formula's first paragraph. I think it should be used on some of the older cards.

I agree with Vagabond's edits.

I made it in Architekt. (et le WIKI)

It's not the good picture for now
http://alkemy-the-game.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/02/lame-garde-tigre-uk.pdf

Card looks good, miniature looks amazing!

We change "fast as lightning"

original text a écrit:When a miniature leaves base contact with him, Feng Sao can perform a Quick Attack without making an opposed REF roll. He can make this attack even if the situation would not normally allow him to do so.

corrected text a écrit:When a opposing miniature leaves base contact with him, Feng Sao can perform a freely Attack by reading Dam one column to the left, without making an opposed REF roll. He can make this attack even if the situation would not normally allow him to do so.

nicoleblond a écrit:We change "fast as lightning"

corrected text a écrit:When a opposing miniature leaves base contact with him, Feng Sao can perform a free attack with the resulting DAM read one column to the left, without making an opposed REF roll. He can make this attack even if the situation would not normally allow him to do so.

Fixed