English Utopia book 1 TRANSLATION APPROUVED

el_ludo a écrit:If anyone can readback, this first part ?

Chronology

Mythic age of creation

[Elle] builds Mornea, then, after the three first Architects, [Orhöm], this one who wants to know and follow the wind. [Orhöm the silvery] brings to Mornea the nocturnal rest and the pale light of [Hannah].
After his curse, [Orhöm] leaves the others architects to travel Mornea, creates the men and orders them to go where the winds carry them.

Age of Peace
Come to the East to find the place where [thebus] has gone. Few families settle on a desert Archipelago of the Dreams Ocean.

[Concorde] Age
Cycle 1097 _ Kastel Kanam burns and 843 residents of the west barony are exiled overseas
Cycle 1100 _ Lead by [Irma) the Templar, 487 survivors sail into the West.
Cycle 1129 _ [Irma] vanishes
Cycle 1268 _ The storm force [ the Utopians] to flee the Archipelago
Cycle 1269 _ Arrvial on the great island
Cycle 1294 _ Building of the first flotilla
Cycle 1302 _ Discovery of the well and exploration of the first caves
Cycle 1353 _ Forteza explosion
Cycle 1350 – 1365 _ Increase trading on Mornea Coast
Cycle 1367-1368 _ Preparation for the Return, intense ship construction
Cycle 1369 _ Return Expedition, permanent settlement on Nacer Engolimo
Cycle 1370 _ Naashti arrive show up at [the Utopians] in Forteza
Cycle 1372 _ Sheikhs learn of UTOPIA existence and reveal this information to all of Mornea


Presentation
UTOPIA is more a concept of society than a real geographical space. If we ask them where they live, the [UTOPIANS] will give the vessel name, if we insist a little more, they will speak of their [ Balsao]. Nevertheless, if they must define the space where they live, who they serve; the [UTOPIANS] indicate the [Dreams Ocean], and they live by and for the sea.
Moreover, they angle their maritime maps around the Ocean, Mornea continent while being the lower end and the Oceanic gap, the upper egde. The great South-North current, which travel the ocean, is always at the center.
Thus are defined the three mains directions of the [UTOPIAN] map, the [Molhe] where the current originates (the south of the Empire of the Jade triad map), the [Arrepio] where it proceeds to the North and the [Nascer] at the opposite of the gap (the east).
However, today the Sheikhs discover the [Utopians] existence and reveal them to the Mornea's Leaders, this one must be located as a people in the diplomatic relationship game.

mallachain a écrit:Here are some suggestions in red.
Text I don't understand is in green

el_ludo a écrit:If anyone can readback, this first part ?

Chronology

Mythic age of creation

[Elle] builds Mornea, then, after the three first Architects, [Orhöm], this one who wants to know and follow the wind. [Orhöm the silvery] brings to Mornea the nocturnal rest and the pale light of [Hannah].
After his curse, [Orhöm] leaves the others architects to travel Mornea, creates the men and orders them to go where the winds carry them.

Age of Peace
Come to the East to find the place where [thebus] has gone. Few families settle on a desert Archipelago of the Dreams Ocean.

[Concorde] Age
Cycle 1097 _ Kastel Kanam burns and 843 residents of the west barony are exiled overseas
Cycle 1100 _ Lead by [Irma) the Templar, 487 survivors sail into the West.
Cycle 1129 _ [Irma] vanishes
Cycle 1268 _ The storm force [ the Utopians] to flee the Archipelago
Cycle 1269 _ Arrvial on the great island
Cycle 1294 _ Building of the first flotilla
Cycle 1302 _ Discovery of the well and exploration of the first caves
Cycle 1353 _ Forteza explosion
Cycle 1350 – 1365 _ Increase trading on Mornea Coast
Cycle 1367-1368 _ Preparation for the Return, intense ship construction
Cycle 1369 _ Return Expedition, permanent settlement on Nacer Engolimo
Cycle 1370 _ Naashti arrive show up at [the Utopians] in Forteza
Cycle 1372 _ Sheikhs learn of UTOPIA existence and reveal this information to all of Mornea


Presentation
UTOPIA is more a concept of society than a real geographical space. If we ask them where they live, the [UTOPIANS] will give the vessel name, if we insist a little more, they will speak of their [ Balsao]. Nevertheless, if they must define the space where they live, who they serve; the [UTOPIANS] indicate the [Dreams Ocean], and they live by and for the sea.
Moreover, they angle draw their maritime maps around the Ocean, Mornea continent while being the lower end and the Oceanic gap, the upper egde. The great South-North current, which travel the ocean, is always at the center.
Thus are defined the three mains directions of the [UTOPIAN] map, the [Molhe] where the current originates (the south of the Empire of the Jade triad map), the [Arrepio] where it proceeds to the North and the [Nascer] at the opposite of the gap (the east).
However, today the Sheikhs discover the [Utopians] existence and reveal them to the Mornea's Leaders, this onethe utopians must be situated must be located as a people in the diplomatic relationship game.

el_ludo a écrit:

mallachain a écrit:Here are some suggestions in red.
Text I don't understand is in green

el_ludo a écrit:If anyone can readback, this first part ?

Chronology

Mythic age of creation

[Elle] builds Mornea, then, after the three first Architects, [Orhöm], this one who wants to know and follow the wind. [Orhöm the silvery] brings to Mornea the nocturnal rest and the pale light of [Hannah].
After his curse, [Orhöm] leaves the others architects to travel Mornea, creates the men and orders them to go where the winds carry them.

Age of Peace
Come to the East to find the place where [thebus] has gone. Few families settle on a desert Archipelago of the Dreams Ocean.

[Concorde] Age
Cycle 1097 _ Kastel Kanam burns and 843 residents of the west barony are exiled overseas
Cycle 1100 _ Lead by [Irma) the Templar, 487 survivors sail into the West.
Cycle 1129 _ [Irma] vanishes
Cycle 1268 _ The storm force [ the Utopians] to flee the Archipelago
Cycle 1269 _ Arrvial on the great island
Cycle 1294 _ Building of the first flotilla
Cycle 1302 _ Discovery of the well and exploration of the first caves
Cycle 1353 _ Forteza explosion
Cycle 1350 – 1365 _ Increase trading on Mornea Coast
Cycle 1367-1368 _ Preparation for the Return, intense ship construction
Cycle 1369 _ Return Expedition, permanent settlement on Nacer Engolimo
Cycle 1370 _ Naashti arrive show up at [the Utopians] in Forteza
Cycle 1372 _ Sheikhs learn of UTOPIA existence and reveal this information to all of Mornea


Presentation
UTOPIA is more a concept of society than a real geographical space. If we ask them where they live, the [UTOPIANS] will give the vessel name, if we insist a little more, they will speak of their [ Balsao]. Nevertheless, if they must define the space where they live, who they serve; the [UTOPIANS] indicate the [Dreams Ocean], and they live by and for the sea.
Moreover, they angle draw their maritime maps around the Ocean, Mornea continent while being the lower end and the Oceanic gap, the upper egde. The great South-North current, which travel the ocean, is always at the center.
Thus are defined the three mains directions of the [UTOPIAN] map, the [Molhe] where the current originates (the south of the Empire of the Jade triad map), the [Arrepio] where it proceeds to the North and the [Nascer] at the opposite of the gap (the east).
However, today the Sheikhs discover the [Utopians] existence and reveal them to the Mornea's Leaders, this onethe utopians must be situated must be located as a people in the diplomatic relationship game.

Thanks for the suggestion, it's more understable with the suggestions in blue ?